LET IT BE LORD ( From my Dream)

[Jesus_is_LORD]

***This song came to me in my dream last night as I was sleeping.
Since I can both read/write music and play by ear, I woke up
and composed what I heard in my dream to the best
of my remembrance. Perhaps 85% close to what I heard in my dream***

Playing all the instruments ( Synth Pad, Piano, Brass, Bass guitar)
on my midi keyboard in FL Studio 20.

Female vocal from LANDR ( https://samples.landr.com/packs/indie-pop-vocals?page=5 )
***headphone recommended***

 

[Christ4Ever]

Dear Brother,
It came off a little rough to me.
The music, and the vocals seem to clash with each other.
When I listened to it the second time, my initial impression of the music and vocals clashing seemed to go away. However, at least in the beginning the song the female vocalist was hard to understand especially when only doing partial phrases. Whether it was because of the male vocal being strong, I couldn't say. Later on in the song they jelled just fine.

You can take my critique with a grain of salt brother! I don't have the hearing I used.

Otherwise, nicely done.

With the Love of Christ Jesus.
YBIC
Nick
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