My lyrics

[Quenton]

Charged

Charged with the crime of man.
Beaten down
Time and time again
Given the crown
As they dug it in.

They said what they could
Hoping you would
Go away!

On that day
As they pushed you on your way
You carried the cross to the end.
Where the dug the nails in!

Chorus:
Like the holes in your hands
I'll forever be with you
Like the holes in your feet
I'll stand up for you
Like the hole in your side
I'll be tested and prevail

When the light appeared gone!
You said here I am
As you rose again
Now my sins
Are forgiven
And life begins
Again!

 

[Jesusgirlkk]

They said what they could
Hoping you would
Go away!

atleast the first time I read it this section it seemed a little out of place. Maybe you could try to make some transition into it so that it flows better. But all in all it has a lot of feeling and seems really good.

 

[Quenton]

Alright...I'm also thinking about adding a second Chorus at the end because the first one just doesn't transition with the end for a repeat